Friday, February 19, 2016

CHARACTERISTIC PERFORMANCE?

11/3/15   

`“I cannot wait until Cameron gets back from the service. He’s been gone almost two years, and carrying on a long distance romance is totally problematic.” Carrie started folding her new clothes that she had bought for their honeymoon in the Caribbean. Carrie, thinking about ’her beloved’ was smiling. She remembered him when they were younger. “I didn’t think he was all that wonderful back then. He had a meanness about him in high school…seemed to be always fighting with someone or other.” She recalled that in one incident he had broken a boy’s noise. Carrie still could see in her mind’s eye the badly swollen nose and purple colored bruise that the boy had suffered from that fight.

That was at the end of senior year. Her classmates had graduated and went their separate ways. Carrie started at a nearby junior college. Cameron had joined the Army. They did not see each other after graduation. After boot camp Cameron had come home for two weeks before he headed off to his deployment in Florida. That was in January. Carrie had seen him at a movie theater. She talked to him for a few minutes before going into her movie. She never thought about him after he went back to Florida. However the letters started arriving from him about a month later.

Carrie opened the shoebox tied with a blue ribbon where she kept his letters. She opened the first envelope that had arrived in February. The letter was all newsy telling Carrie about his life in the Army. The letter was interesting. “I was surprised when the letters kept arriving. I think I got a letter about every ten days or so,” she reflected. Carrie realized that she started looking forward to Cameron’s letters, and she started writing responses to him. “He seems different. His writing is filled with little stories about his service activities and the other soldiers. He is very humorous.”  Carrie often laughed out loud as she read his letters.

Then after about six months the letters added something else. Cameron had another skill that Carrie had been unaware of. He was a poet, and his poems were really good. She loved to read them, and found herself reading them over and over. “When we were in school I never heard him share a poem in English class. Looks like he has talents no one knew about.”  Then the poetry took on a new theme. They were becoming love poems. “Some of those poems got really hot. I began to love them and then I realized that I was falling in love with Cameron as well. Then the love letters started to arrive. It was getting serious, but I loved it.”

“Then one day a small package arrived. Cameron texted me and asked me not to open it until he called me. When he called I could not believe it. He asked me to marry him, and then told me to open the package. There was a beautiful diamond ring in the little velvet box.
“Put it on Carrie, and text me a picture of it on your finger.
“I did. He told me that he could not wait until he was discharged from the Army to do this. From then on I was the sole planner for a wedding to be held the next year.” He will be home in two weeks. The wedding is planned, deposits made, dress purchased. I am on Cloud 9.”
I sometimes think of what a nasty guy he was in high school. I think the Army had made a beneficial change in Cameron. I have heard that boys become men in the service.

“Carrie,” my mother shouted, “Cameron is on the phone.” I literally ran to the phone. “Are you home?”

“Yes,” he answered in a voice that sounded strange, “I am calling to tell you I do not want to get married.” “What?” I yelled.” Everything is all set.”

“Boy, you are dumber that I had imagined. Did you really think I wanted to marry you? You couldn’t even figure out that the ring was a fake. You were so high, mighty, and snooty in high school. I vowed that someday I would get even. I think I have. My friends and I sure had some fun with the whole story.”  Then he hung up.

I am sitting here wondering what made me think he could change. You cannot change the spots on a leopard, can you? Better to find out now than in two years!

Now all I’m left with is a mess to deal with and a fake diamond ring.


©Corinne Mustafa
November, 2015



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